Stuck in one place
Not able to move
Pain is constant
My will is fading
Slashes rip through my flesh
Crimson fluid oozes down my back
I cry out in pain and agony
My captors laughter rings in my ears
The sharp flick of metal against flesh
Another wound has been garnered
I clench my jaw and close my eyes
Against the scream fighting to escape
The hours pass by in unrelenting pain
My inflicted torture never ends
Over and over my vision is blurred
Blood, sweat and tears begin pooling together
My wrists and ankles are unchained
My broken beaten body slumps to the floor
Taking in the comfort of the cool stone
Ragged breaths my lungs are taking
My comfort doesn't last that long
My captors roughly drag my upright
Shoving me in the direction of the door
I stumble and fall trying to block the pain
They grab me under my arms
Seeing that I have no strength
Drag me down the hall to a door
One that I had hoped never to enter
I try to struggle and free myself
But my attempts are feeble and fail
They shove me through and lock the door
To my horror I see, what occurs in nightmares.
I love it!!!!!!
thank you i like to write about the darker side of the human soul. lol i had some problems with this one cuz i wanted to add more but it looked finished at the same time.
but it sounds really really good to me...........so no worries!!!!!!!
my.... love the description...the way you play with words... nice... dark indeed.. nice imagination you have and you projected it well...well done... ^^
Keep it up.. will be reading more of yours... i hope you will write more...
I agree with Astaroth... ^^
I was expecting to read about metaphoric chains.... the chains of life... the chains of love....
But, I think Im far more impressed with this being about real chains, real capture, real pain.