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    Chances

    I ask for one thing
    Only to be forgiven
    Give me something
    So I can go on living

    I want to wash away
    All my sins
    Each and every day
    It will never end

    I carry my scars
    Of what I done
    It will take everything
    Until I have none

    I know my life
    Is forsaken
    My spirit
    Will never awaken.

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    Re: Chances

    I liked it ,made me think of what to write for my dad lolgood job hope to c more
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    Re: Chances

    Nice poem, Hellknight. Short, and abruptly to the point. Nice work, Hellknight. I'd like to continue reading your work.

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    Hey thanks white wolf and Fresdboo lol, I though more too so I'll post it up real quick.

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    Re: Chances

    very cool poem i didnt see the tittle till
    i did mine but this one really is awesome
    i likes it alot and i can see where your comming
    from. i loved the poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Chances

    Hell-chan I liked it to it's just there were a couple of grammatical errors that could have been fixed but other then that it was amazing.
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