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Reply With QuoteI liked it ,made me think of what to write for my dad lolgood job hope to c more
I ask for one thing
Only to be forgiven
Give me something
So I can go on living
I want to wash away
All my sins
Each and every day
It will never end
I carry my scars
Of what I done
It will take everything
Until I have none
I know my life
Is forsaken
My spirit
Will never awaken.
I liked it ,made me think of what to write for my dad lolgood job hope to c more
Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday
Nice poem, Hellknight. Short, and abruptly to the point. Nice work, Hellknight. I'd like to continue reading your work.
Hey thanks white wolf and Fresdboo lol, I though more too so I'll post it up real quick.
very cool poem i didnt see the tittle till
i did mine but this one really is awesome
i likes it alot and i can see where your comming
from. i loved the poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Hell-chan I liked it to it's just there were a couple of grammatical errors that could have been fixed but other then that it was amazing.
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