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    The winds of change blow , the cry for something
    that has yet to be grows ever stronger urging haste
    to those who might tred slowly thinking time is of no
    consequence. Only when its to late do they wish for
    time be on there side.

    How lonely is that path they take , pushing everyone
    and everything aside thinking its so hopless as they do.
    What they think is the right thing , always lingering wanting
    to keep the path dark so they can live there shell of a life.
    Thinking that the darkness will keep them safe.

    As they lay there in there bed looking to the ceiling , staring
    off into the nothingness of that still night , the fan rumbling
    making them nod from the soft hipnotic noise it makes. A tear
    roll's down there cheek to the pillow as they muffle there scream,
    angry at what has become a living hell.

    The winds of change no one can really fight it , but they can never
    give up either or they will slip through the cracks of indeference and
    never find the lighted path that is at the end of the path less traveld.
    The darkness it is soothing yet poisoness to the soul , the light it is
    pure yet it makes you ignorant of the truth which is better ?
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    this poem is about recognising when to accept the change in your life and
    when to fight it some pick the wrong reasons and end up loosing more
    than gaining it. and i think you can fight the change but it takes knowing
    how to deal with it that makes it truly a loosing battle or a triumphent

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    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Change!

    The wind of change....
    As I need some possitive change. Maybe those winds will come and blow my direction.

    Anyway, this was a thought out, and well felt piece. Its been a while since I've had the pleasure of reading your work. And, as always I seem to be able to find many portions of your writing that seem to speak so personally to me.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Change!

    Nice Poem it's sad how most people are so afraid of change. Sometimes change can be a good thing cause it could make everything a little more interesting,but some still choose to live the exact same way and end up alone and confused cause they've been so used to doing the same thing all the time. Look forward to seeing more of your work.
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