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    Change ~Dedication to a friend~

    Ever since I could remember
    you've been the guy
    who people loved to hate

    But now something's happened
    Something's changed
    deep inside you
    Something I didn't know
    that would happen to you

    Like I said I didn't know it
    was possible for you
    but you managed to surprise
    even me.

    You actually cared so much
    for someone that you
    took them in when that person
    was kicked out of the one
    place they called home and shared
    your own.

    The fact that surprised me was
    that you give up something that
    was so precious to you
    to help this one person
    even if it meant giving up your
    social life.

    I am amazed at how
    much you changed
    and I have to say
    is I'm proud
    and happy for you.

    You didn't care much
    for people
    in fact you were a stubborn
    arse.

    But now you've changed
    into something completly
    unexpected Dom
    and for this
    I'm happy.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


    I wrote this for my best bud you suprised me when we were talking last night so I dedicated this to him.

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    Re: Change ~Dedication to a friend~

    Awww...how cute cause it was dedicated to your friend!!! And you were happy at the end!!! I like it a lot cause of that reason!!! I hope to read more!
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    Re: Change ~Dedication to a friend~

    wow how this become like this ....nice poem i like the real feeling in this poem ..and nice end..i love it ....keep up....

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    Re: Change ~Dedication to a friend~

    Indeed a nice poem and I'm glad to hear that people are changing. Indeed people can change and that'll make this world a better place.
    I enjoyed reading this poem- it's really good, there was nothing I wouldn't like, it was interesting and easy to read it. Good work.

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Change ~Dedication to a friend~

    Yeah thanx for the comments. And after I worte this I felt really sick. This has to be the very first mushy poem I wrote and to tell you the truth I don't know what made me write this. I think I'll stick with writing sad and depressing poems and may through in some morbid or slightly humorous ones but not mushy poems or love poems...or else I might hurl all over the place..>_<

    But again thanks for the comments..

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