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    Changed Person

    Like a liveing hell my
    life is burning with frustation
    and manipulations,as i keep
    my self from turning inwards
    with my despise of this world.

    You come to me like a saving grace
    and turn my darkness white with
    hope and a smile, why would you do this?,
    i have done nothing but hurt and reject evryone
    i ever met wich now you have me thinking regret.

    There were no smiles or even a laugh
    just life in hell as i did worst to make
    people stay away,but you kept at me
    never leaving ,never wavring in your faith
    in me.

    It took a while but i am difrent now
    as my living hell is now a living love
    for everything ,as i know that people
    need love not hate in return.


    this poem is about having somone
    there to show you that life can smile
    at you if you just open your eye's and heart
    and over look everything that makes you
    mad or sad, this is for a very awesome freind who
    i met last month they really changed me
    a bit thanks you know who you are
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Changed Person

    Bro you have some the most awesome dark poems! The first line caught my eye and the rest was great! Keep up the good work Bro! 5 out of 5

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    thanks Bro i am glad you liked it and i will try and keep doing poems llike this
    and hope people that read it get an idea of how people can change your life
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Don't worry Bro they will understand, especially when you put it into a form that everyone can see! Don't get me wrong word of mouth is great, but writing it is even better because you always have a way to go back and look at what was written and begin to think! I know that I've seen a lot of changes and it's mainly from the people in my life, so this poem and your style are excellent!

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    thanks im glad you think so and thats what i was going for as well.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    I liked it. You've written another great poem. For a minute there I thought you were talking about me cause that's how it made me feel,but I know it was written for someone else. Keep up the good work.

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    Aww Chris! *blushing* That was really great and I appreciate it a lot. I'll always be there for you, to edit your poems too lol. Very nice job on this one it was very heartfelt and the way you transitioned was very great.
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