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Reply With QuoteBro you have some the most awesome dark poems! The first line caught my eye and the rest was great! Keep up the good work Bro! 5 out of 5
Like a liveing hell my
life is burning with frustation
and manipulations,as i keep
my self from turning inwards
with my despise of this world.
You come to me like a saving grace
and turn my darkness white with
hope and a smile, why would you do this?,
i have done nothing but hurt and reject evryone
i ever met wich now you have me thinking regret.
There were no smiles or even a laugh
just life in hell as i did worst to make
people stay away,but you kept at me
never leaving ,never wavring in your faith
in me.
It took a while but i am difrent now
as my living hell is now a living love
for everything ,as i know that people
need love not hate in return.
this poem is about having somone
there to show you that life can smile
at you if you just open your eye's and heart
and over look everything that makes you
mad or sad, this is for a very awesome freind who
i met last month they really changed me
a bit thanks you know who you are
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Bro you have some the most awesome dark poems! The first line caught my eye and the rest was great! Keep up the good work Bro! 5 out of 5
thanks Bro i am glad you liked it and i will try and keep doing poems llike this
and hope people that read it get an idea of how people can change your life
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Don't worry Bro they will understand, especially when you put it into a form that everyone can see! Don't get me wrong word of mouth is great, but writing it is even better because you always have a way to go back and look at what was written and begin to think! I know that I've seen a lot of changes and it's mainly from the people in my life, so this poem and your style are excellent!
thanks im glad you think so and thats what i was going for as well.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
I liked it. You've written another great poem. For a minute there I thought you were talking about me cause that's how it made me feel,but I know it was written for someone else. Keep up the good work.
Aww Chris! *blushing* That was really great and I appreciate it a lot. I'll always be there for you, to edit your poems too lol. Very nice job on this one it was very heartfelt and the way you transitioned was very great.
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
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