Changing

Changing

The world is changing
All the trees
The animals
The people
They're all chaning

My friends are changing
Their hair
Their cloths
Their persinality
It's all changing

I'm changing
My heart
my mind
Me
Everything is changing

So why can't you?
Move on
Let me change my way
Don't try to change me

The earth is changing
The people are changing
My frinds are changing
I'm changing

Move on
change your way
Change without me
Change on your oun
Like I hvae all my life.

The world is changing
All the trees
The animals
The people
They're all changing


Well thats it I hope you like it.^.^

It's sweet with a nice message ^_^ Who is it based on?

hi P.R Princes, i like your poem i think is great i hope i see more from you in the future.:thumb:

It's based on me and how I'm not able to show my true self.
and I'm not aloud to change on my oun.
and it's nice to meet you scorpion_ing
I hope to see you around also^.^

"The world is changing
All the trees
The animals
The people
They're all changing"

Yeah that pretty much our life its all about changes and move it on...sometimes its hard but it makes us stronger...nice work!!

Thank you very much I did try to do good on this one.

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Originally Posted by P.R. Princes

It's based on me and how I'm not able to show my true self.
and I'm not aloud to change on my oun.
and it's nice to meet you scorpion_ing
I hope to see you around also^.^

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Really? I didnt get any of that out of the poem. I just wish there was some decriptive imagery. You know, see the trees and such in my minds eye.

Nice! This one is letting that person know to stop focusing on changing you and focus on the changes around you! This poem was written beautifully! Hope to see more of you work in the future!

BlueFox1