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    Changing

    Changing

    The world is changing
    All the trees
    The animals
    The people
    They're all chaning

    My friends are changing
    Their hair
    Their cloths
    Their persinality
    It's all changing

    I'm changing
    My heart
    my mind
    Me
    Everything is changing

    So why can't you?
    Move on
    Let me change my way
    Don't try to change me

    The earth is changing
    The people are changing
    My frinds are changing
    I'm changing

    Move on
    change your way
    Change without me
    Change on your oun
    Like I hvae all my life.

    The world is changing
    All the trees
    The animals
    The people
    They're all changing


    Well thats it I hope you like it.^.^

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
    ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~

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    Re: Changing

    It's sweet with a nice message ^_^ Who is it based on?

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    Re: Changing

    hi P.R Princes, i like your poem i think is great i hope i see more from you in the future.

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    Re: Changing

    It's based on me and how I'm not able to show my true self.
    and I'm not aloud to change on my oun.
    and it's nice to meet you scorpion_ing
    I hope to see you around also^.^

    ~Falling in love one step at a time~
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    Re: Changing

    "The world is changing
    All the trees
    The animals
    The people
    They're all changing"

    Yeah that pretty much our life its all about changes and move it on...sometimes its hard but it makes us stronger...nice work!!
    Last edited by Arukih; Sep 11, 2006 at 05:27 PM.

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    Re: Changing

    Thank you very much I did try to do good on this one.

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    Re: Changing

    Quote Originally Posted by P.R. Princes View Post
    It's based on me and how I'm not able to show my true self.
    and I'm not aloud to change on my oun.
    and it's nice to meet you scorpion_ing
    I hope to see you around also^.^
    Really? I didnt get any of that out of the poem. I just wish there was some decriptive imagery. You know, see the trees and such in my minds eye.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Changing

    Nice! This one is letting that person know to stop focusing on changing you and focus on the changes around you! This poem was written beautifully! Hope to see more of you work in the future!

    BlueFox1

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