Thread: Changing

It's sweet with a nice message ^_^ Who is it based on?

hi P.R Princes, i like your poem i think is great i hope i see more from you in the future.

It's based on me and how I'm not able to show my true self.
and I'm not aloud to change on my oun.
and it's nice to meet you scorpion_ing
I hope to see you around also^.^

"The world is changing
All the trees
The animals
The people
They're all changing"

Yeah that pretty much our life its all about changes and move it on...sometimes its hard but it makes us stronger...nice work!!

Thank you very much I did try to do good on this one.

Originally Posted by P.R. Princes

It's based on me and how I'm not able to show my true self.
and I'm not aloud to change on my oun.
and it's nice to meet you scorpion_ing
I hope to see you around also^.^

Really? I didnt get any of that out of the poem. I just wish there was some decriptive imagery. You know, see the trees and such in my minds eye.

Nice! This one is letting that person know to stop focusing on changing you and focus on the changes around you! This poem was written beautifully! Hope to see more of you work in the future!

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