Hmmm.... I like it quite well... a bit strange but very interesting... I like the fact that it's a poem-story... it's very interesting!!!!
Do make all of the parts- it's very cool!!!!
Dunno what anime it is based on (since I'm just starting my way toward knowing anime well), but it must be good if it has nspired you to write this...
A nice work! I'll be waiting forward for more.