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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,484 | Changing Life (Part Four) Stop!!! As you should see, this is part four. If you haven't read the other three parts are follow this link: Changing Life (Part One) Changing Life (Part Four) Here you sit In great despair But what about your girlfriend Do you not even care While this was going on She was sleeping with another man You thought she couldn't do this But oh yes, she can But you don't know You don't have a clue And it feels like the world is crashing Falling right before you To add on You later caught a cold But that will not stop you To make everything unfold You go to see if she is okay The one that's in bed The doctor said she'll manage But told you to rest your head You ignore her advice And call your girlfriend instead But on the other side No words are to be said The cold is worse than it is And you start home to your front door But as soon as you enter You collapse on the floor Next thing you know You're in your bed in surprise And the one to comfort you Is your girlfriend at your side But the nicest thing she'll do Is take care of you at your place And once you're finally better You'll talk face to face She reveals the truth She admits the affair And all you can do Is just sit and stare Next thing you know She's out the door It seems right now She's your girlfriend no more Life is at halt Your body goes numb You want to move But you can't even move a thumb A phone message brings you to your senses It's from the other's family The girl is awake And you're the only one she wants to see Another decision is to be made And it's all up to you The dreadful question to yourself is What are you going to do. Writer's Notes: Nope, not the final part. Part five I'm sure is. I don't care how much information is going to be jammed in there, it's going to end at the next part. Anyways, again, I left out stuff I would like to be in there and changed some stuff because I didn't want it too be too long. Tell me what you think and thank you for reading. (Final part is finished: Changing Life (Final Part Five))
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![]() Credits: 49,375 | Re: Changing Life (Part Four) Wow!!! This is great!!! I really love this part- if I could find something I didn't like that much in the rest, then this one is just perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don' t even know what to say... A great work!!!!!! I'll be waiting for that fifth part... you really cought my interest with this one!!!!!!!! I really want to know how this ends. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,484 | Re: Changing Life (Part Four) Thanks. Glad you liked it. I'll try my best to make the final part the best.
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