Chaos105

Changing Life Part One
Final year of high school
Yet there's nothing for you to do
But there's one thing that's about you
And you didn't have a clue

You've had this secret admirer
You didn't even know
Yes you have seen her before
But her emotions for you didn't show

So here's the plan
Her friend you see
Is going to make a set up
On your favorite hill with a tree

You are expecting to see the one you talked to
Yet she not going to be around
It's just you and you're admirer
Standing on the same ground

She tells her emotions for you
And she wants to go out
So you finally figure out what this is
What this meeting is all about

You think about this for a minute
What will it be
You finally say yes
And she's happy as can be

A few weeks has pasted
Yet this relationship is hazy
You don't have strong feelings for her
This relationship is empty

So then this one night your girlfriend calls
And asks Do you love me
But you respond I don't know
And that's how it seems to be

The next day you go to the hill
And her friend meets you there
She'll ask you all these reasons
With that indescribable stare

She told you that the reason why you're friends
Is for your admirer to get closer to you
She really liked you and loved your personality
And with these reasons you ask What should I do

So you finally know what to do
And you go out and get her
Though what you say
Do you thing she'll be a forgiver

You say that you love her
And she looks very surprised
Yet she is so happy
Because it was no lie

Together you go out again
And it's for real this time
This was a true relationship
And your love was like an endless shine

Everything was great
But life is always changing
It never wants right to win
It's like you never seem to be winning

It could happen in a day
Will you be ready
This is that one event
That horrible tragedy
~Me

Writer's Notes: Part one is finally done. And it's a long one at that. Longest poem/story I have ever written. I was writing this pretty much with a writers block. It was hard for me. I think I dragged this one too far though. I would've put more, but it was getting way too long anyways. I hope you had the patience to read all of this. Thanks for reading. =) (Be sure to read part two while you're at it. It has the information why I'm writing this. Changing Life < Part two )

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ryomakurosaki

omg!! very good. i liked it alot. it seemed like a story and i fell in love with it!! many people can relate to this poem. actually the poem is like a short part of my life. i liked it alot!! very good i hope to see more from u!!

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Can't believe I could think that he would
just follow me everywhere I go

BAUTIFULSOUL

o my. that was the best poem i have ever read. i love the emotion you put in it. omg! that is such a good poem!!=)

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THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D

kamikazekrn

once i saw tree i thought to myself, this HAS to be relating to KGNE theres no way this could be coincidence(confirmed by your sig)

amazing poem relating to an amazing anime
nice flow and rhyme, along with the relation which really excited me the most