Chantal I love you I never want to see you cry
I was so happey when you said I do
To you babey I would not lie
I knowyo love me too
Your brown eyes sparkle with mine
in the summers day
Please send me a sign
I will never let you go,no matter what you say
To you I write this poem
To say I love you
This to my gf/soon to be wife
Your name wouldn't happen to be Jeremy would it? No don't answer that, that was just a really bad inside joke on my part. Anyway, on to poetry....
It was short... VERY SHORT, so short infact it was hard to gather a whole lot of feeling from it. But in what you wrote, there was enough of a cutesy, lovey-dovey tone to it. Im sure if I were this Chantal...... Id be blushing.
It was a cute poem. Punctuation wouldve been nice.