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    Chapters of life


    Chapters of life


    I’m the only one would cant Wight my story.

    Chapters of...

    Love.

    Hate.

    And lots more.

    People like to say and think that.

    There destiny is set out before the first page it opened.

    But how do they know that?

    You will never know to you Wright and read it yourself.

    That’s the fact behind it not fiction in my book.

    The pages full to bursting limit.

    All the details...

    All the emotion behind them.

    That’s all it is it’s my own personal diary published to the world.

    It’s my life live it to the full.

    And it'll be easy to read in the future.

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    Re: Chapters of life

    i likes it well done keep doing more lizzy cus you are a great writer

    thank you equinn

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    Re: Chapters of life

    I like u're poem, it talks about destiny which I like in poems. Very encouraging too.^_^

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    Re: Chapters of life

    Wight and Wright? Wahhhaaattt? Don't get me all mad now Lizzie!

    You are lucky that they happen to be real dictionary terms, if they weren't, I would have been really really mad... But, those words don't fit in this context. Okay, enough lecturing. Well, I think Lizzie deserves some cookies, too, so here:

    Though I got a little confused at first, I find reading your poem to be rather fun.. It was a smooth sail. The sentences are short and easy to read. I also like how your title ties in well with the content of the poem. That sometimes is hard to do. So, Kedar gives you an extra cookie. Keep up the work, and continue to improve. And remember, don't forget me as you age. Always remember Kedar and his lectures. OK?

    That's all.

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    Re: Chapters of life

    This seems like a future poem and thats why I love it and it's like a book as well. I hope to see more in the future as well that I can see you'll do more amazing ones anyway.
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Chapters of life

    hehe thanks you for the comments ^__^

    and kedar never could i forget u lol ( good thing i didnt get him mad huh lol)

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    Do not give up on life because we do not what is life

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    thanks for the comment ^__^.... and i know what u mean by that kinda lol

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