Thread: Chapters of life

i likes it well done keep doing more lizzy cus you are a great writer

I like u're poem, it talks about destiny which I like in poems. Very encouraging too.^_^

Wight and Wright? Wahhhaaattt? Don't get me all mad now Lizzie!

You are lucky that they happen to be real dictionary terms, if they weren't, I would have been really really mad... But, those words don't fit in this context. Okay, enough lecturing. Well, I think Lizzie deserves some cookies, too, so here:

Though I got a little confused at first, I find reading your poem to be rather fun.. It was a smooth sail. The sentences are short and easy to read. I also like how your title ties in well with the content of the poem. That sometimes is hard to do. So, Kedar gives you an extra cookie. Keep up the work, and continue to improve. And remember, don't forget me as you age. Always remember Kedar and his lectures. OK?

That's all.

This seems like a future poem and thats why I love it and it's like a book as well. I hope to see more in the future as well that I can see you'll do more amazing ones anyway.

hehe thanks you for the comments ^__^

and kedar never could i forget u lol ( good thing i didnt get him mad huh lol)

Do not give up on life because we do not what is life

thanks for the comment ^__^.... and i know what u mean by that kinda lol