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    Cherish Love

    You hold me, embrace me, Kiss me
    Is that puppy love we see???
    You called me angel, sweetie, your dove
    Or is that our precious love?

    I want you, need you, desirer you
    Do you want that too?
    I feel happy, free, heartfelt with you
    Do you feel this too?

    I value our love my sweet
    Causing you to hear my heart beat
    Dear, please feel our love last
    Even through out this horrid past

    Treasure these feelings my dear
    Remember that I'm always near
    Don't forget me or our love
    As we let our hearts fly above

    I will praise our beautiful love as always
    As we continue loving each other in different ways
    What would you call this feeling my dove??
    ....Cherish Love



    Enjoy. ^^

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    Re: Cherish Love

    Aww That Poem Was So Beautiful You Are So Talented

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    Re: Cherish Love

    That was beautiful.... I liked it a lot and the only misspelling is that there isn't supposed to be an r at the end of desire...
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: Cherish Love

    I will praise our beautiful love as always
    i loved this line. very powerful. overal i liked it also. love is a confusing thing and its hard to be sure of. you conveyed that perfectly.
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    Re: Cherish Love

    wow this was so sweet and romantic! There weren't any spelling mistakes except for one! It was a lovely poem I really hope to see more!^^



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