That Cherry Blossom

I look upon thee, that cherry blossom tree,
I seek upon every flower; each soul holds so much power,
I look at that close to me, though I don’t see,
I put my feelings aside just so I don’t cower and I find their fragrance something sour,
All beautiful in sight, all give my spirit much light,
But there is one, different from the some,
Oh, but the distance the height! I can’t reach try all that I might,
At the top, I dream to come, because I hear your distant hum,
I can hear your call and here I await your fall,
For that is the blossom I choose and with that there is patience and hope I will not lose.

That is a sweet poem. I liked the part "At the top I dream to come because I hear your distant hum". I look forward to reading your next one.

deep and meaningful. I didnt get the poem at first but now i get wut it means and stuff. It's great, tho the use of stanzas would be nice to make it easier for the reader to read it, overall great poem

This one actually came from a sonnet I once wrote...