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    That Cherry Blossom

    I look upon thee, that cherry blossom tree,
    I seek upon every flower; each soul holds so much power,
    I look at that close to me, though I don’t see,
    I put my feelings aside just so I don’t cower and I find their fragrance something sour,
    All beautiful in sight, all give my spirit much light,
    But there is one, different from the some,
    Oh, but the distance the height! I can’t reach try all that I might,
    At the top, I dream to come, because I hear your distant hum,
    I can hear your call and here I await your fall,
    For that is the blossom I choose and with that there is patience and hope I will not lose.
    Thank you Lasura!
    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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    Re: That Cherry Blossom

    That is a sweet poem. I liked the part "At the top I dream to come because I hear your distant hum". I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: That Cherry Blossom

    deep and meaningful. I didnt get the poem at first but now i get wut it means and stuff. It's great, tho the use of stanzas would be nice to make it easier for the reader to read it, overall great poem

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    Re: That Cherry Blossom

    This one actually came from a sonnet I once wrote...
    Thank you Lasura!
    My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10

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