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    Cherry Blossoms

    Cherry blossoms float heavenly in the air
    Falling to the ground endlessly
    like snow flakes.

    Coloring the ground
    A beautiful site to see.

    Happiness blooms under the heavenly trees,
    But so does sadness.

    A young girl loses her mother
    and mourns the loss.

    Even her tears
    are as heavenly as the cherry blossoms.

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms

    That is such a sweet and sad poem. I hate the girl lost her mom. Good job and I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms

    The last stanza was poetic. The others? Seemed like bad wording in my opinion.
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    Re: Cherry Blossoms

    hmmm..nice...a nice short poem...good job ^^
    but u can make it longer though

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms

    It was good for starters ^_^ I like the comparison you did of sadness / tears with heavenly / happiness.

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms

    Yay good poem. I like it. it was short and sweet. Hope to see more.(^.^)

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    Re: Cherry Blossoms

    very nice poem i like it alot but it was kinda short tho
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