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    The Cherub and The Devil

    Sorry, it's not too long, but I hope you all like it ^-^


    Nails pressing plams, just breaking skin.

    The smoke cleared away, and I had seen
    more than a person could ever think to
    pray for.

    Caught in the middle between the cherub
    and the devil, only by his hands can I
    be saved, not a breath will I intake.

    To laugh in the face of loneliness, and lie behind
    the back of fate, a purely dreamed kind
    of life.

    The star burned imprint of an iris,
    the memory of breath at my ear, and
    hand in my hand.
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    Re: The Cherub and The Devil

    Wow...! Not really too short fo me. And I thought It was so beautiful, sophisticated.

    I was in the shower not to long ago... pondering thoughts so simular to what you have written here.

    And upon completing my shower, I felt impowered. I chose the cherub. Despite all my previous self loathing. Laughing in the face of lonliness doesn't have to be simply a dreamed kind of life.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Cherub and The Devil

    Thank you ^-^ Usually most of my poems aren't this short..I suppose that's why I felt a little insecure about this poem.

    Yes, your thoughts were very similar to mine, I think I like yours better than mine lol.

    I would love to read some of your poetry, do you have any on here...I haven't really looked yet?
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