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    A Cherub's Kiss

    This is a poem I wrote...but I took part of the title from another of my poems because it suited this poem much better..I hope you all like it ^-^


    Your hand traced a trail up and down the
    curve of my back, the star burned imprint
    around your iris stared back at me as
    our eyes tangled together.

    The cool of your breath rested at my ear, a
    smile lurked its way onto my face.

    Moving my lips to gently touch to yours an ache
    makes its way through the folds of my brain through to
    the blood coursing my veins.

    As the wings from your back unfold quivering
    slightly from bottom to top, they enclose me;
    drown me, soul and all.

    You are the hope that cradles me through
    the loneliness in this purely dreamed kind
    of life.

    Now a breath may I intake?
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    Re: A Cherub's Kiss

    I would like for you so much to put that to audio ... talk real slow and sexy... LOL... You could do this for a living; ha-ha!

    I really liked it... makes me want to get in a romantic scene and talk like that to some one
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    Re: A Cherub's Kiss

    Lmao wow that's a first.
    Thanks though, I am glad you liked it ^-^
    I am actually in the process of writing another poem, I'll post it when it's finished :]
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    Re: A Cherub's Kiss

    Quote Originally Posted by Echo View Post
    Lmao wow that's a first.
    Thanks though, I am glad you liked it ^-^
    I am actually in the process of writing another poem, I'll post it when it's finished :]
    Well, Let me know when you post it just in case I don't see it!
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