Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child?
Finding the sweet inside the sour.
Swallow evil, and taste the power.
Their hatred pours... seeming so vile.
Hold on tightly to that child.
Your inner child will not cry.
Although spilled milk is now knee high.
This child, they can't take away.
They're angry, but you laugh and play.
Remember the child that you neglected?
The innocent love, you dissrespected?
Hate wont control me, although they presume.
Can't have my child in spirit, As it were from my womb.
Last edited by Peach_follows; Sep 04, 2007 at 10:47 AM.
... Not Ever Again...
Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child?
IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU.
THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
this poem is pure evil it is proof that
no matter how pure you were inside
that tere is always something there to
twist the inocents no matter how secure
you thnk it is.
like the light breeze that seems harmless
but let it brush across a deck of cards and the
cards wil fall so easily just like your inocents.
and children that loose that purity never
get it back and they grow bitter inside
the smile is just a wall thatb shows regret
and hatred towards the thing that made them like
they are.
this poem is very awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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