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    The child.

    Finding the sweet inside the sour.
    Swallow evil, and taste the power.

    Their hatred pours... seeming so vile.
    Hold on tightly to that child.

    Your inner child will not cry.
    Although spilled milk is now knee high.

    This child, they can't take away.
    They're angry, but you laugh and play.

    Remember the child that you neglected?
    The innocent love, you dissrespected?

    Hate wont control me, although they presume.
    Can't have my child in spirit, As it were from my womb.
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    Re: The child.

    Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child?

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    Re: The child.

    Quote Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL View Post
    Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child?
    Its about protecting ones inner child. And investing in the future of children.
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    Re: The child.

    this poem is pure evil it is proof that
    no matter how pure you were inside
    that tere is always something there to
    twist the inocents no matter how secure
    you thnk it is.

    like the light breeze that seems harmless
    but let it brush across a deck of cards and the
    cards wil fall so easily just like your inocents.

    and children that loose that purity never
    get it back and they grow bitter inside
    the smile is just a wall thatb shows regret
    and hatred towards the thing that made them like
    they are.

    this poem is very awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The child.

    That was an awesome poem i have one that i may post if its ok with u can u send me a pm iwould love it if u will read it and tell me if it worthy to put up here if u want to go to www.ayjw.com and serch for cem or Serch for The Deepest pit of poverty
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    Re: The child.

    Quote Originally Posted by rikku07 View Post
    That was an awesome poem i have one that i may post if its ok with u can u send me a pm iwould love it if u will read it and tell me if it worthy to put up here if u want to go to The Association of Young Journalists, AYJW - News Media, Travel, Games, and More - College and Media Directory and serch for cem or Serch for The Deepest pit of poverty
    Gladly, I love to read the work of others... But there's no need to wonder if something is "worthy" enough for AO. Im sure as long as its respectful of rules people will enjoy reading whatever you have to share...^^
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