The child.

*Peach_follows* · Sep 04, 2007, 10:08 AM

Finding the sweet inside the sour.
Swallow evil, and taste the power.

Their hatred pours... seeming so vile.
Hold on tightly to that child.

Your inner child will not cry.
Although spilled milk is now knee high.

This child, they can't take away.
They're angry, but you laugh and play.

Remember the child that you neglected?
The innocent love, you dissrespected?

Hate wont control me, although they presume.
Can't have my child in spirit, As it were from my womb.

BAUTIFULSOUL · Sep 04, 2007, 10:54 AM

Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child?

*Peach_follows* · Sep 04, 2007, 11:42 AM

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Originally Posted by BAUTIFULSOUL

Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child?

Its about protecting ones inner child. And investing in the future of children.

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Sep 04, 2007, 01:50 PM

this poem is pure evil it is proof that
no matter how pure you were inside
that tere is always something there to
twist the inocents no matter how secure
you thnk it is.

like the light breeze that seems harmless
but let it brush across a deck of cards and the
cards wil fall so easily just like your inocents.

and children that loose that purity never
get it back and they grow bitter inside
the smile is just a wall thatb shows regret
and hatred towards the thing that made them like
they are.

this poem is very awesome

rikku07 · Sep 04, 2007, 03:57 PM

That was an awesome poem i have one that i may post if its ok with u can u send me a pm iwould love it if u will read it and tell me if it worthy to put up here if u want to go to www.ayjw.com and serch for cem or Serch for The Deepest pit of poverty

*Peach_follows* · Sep 04, 2007, 07:50 PM

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Originally Posted by rikku07

That was an awesome poem i have one that i may post if its ok with u can u send me a pm iwould love it if u will read it and tell me if it worthy to put up here if u want to go to The Association of Young Journalists, AYJW - News Media, Travel, Games, and More - College and Media Directory and serch for cem or Serch for The Deepest pit of poverty

Gladly, I love to read the work of others... But there's no need to wonder if something is "worthy" enough for AO. Im sure as long as its respectful of rules people will enjoy reading whatever you have to share...^^

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Peach_follows Moving right along.... Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,165 Thanks: 62 Thanked 64 Times in 56 Posts Credits: 3,534	The child. Finding the sweet inside the sour. Swallow evil, and taste the power. Their hatred pours... seeming so vile. Hold on tightly to that child. Your inner child will not cry. Although spilled milk is now knee high. This child, they can't take away. They're angry, but you laugh and play. Remember the child that you neglected? The innocent love, you dissrespected? Hate wont control me, although they presume. Can't have my child in spirit, As it were from my womb. __________________ If you don't like my peaches. Don't shake my tree. http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt Last edited by Peach_follows; Sep 04, 2007 at 11:47 AM.
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BAUTIFULSOUL Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ontario, canada Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,187	Re: The child. Hi nice poem! but could you tell me is this poem about evil trying to make the child evil or is trying to take the child? __________________ IF YOU LISTEN CLOSELY, YOU CAN HEAR MY HEART BEATING FOR YOU. THIS BEAUTIFUL SIG MADE BY LASURA=D
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,601	Re: The child. this poem is pure evil it is proof that no matter how pure you were inside that tere is always something there to twist the inocents no matter how secure you thnk it is. like the light breeze that seems harmless but let it brush across a deck of cards and the cards wil fall so easily just like your inocents. and children that loose that purity never get it back and they grow bitter inside the smile is just a wall thatb shows regret and hatred towards the thing that made them like they are. this poem is very awesome __________________
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rikku07 Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 90	Re: The child. That was an awesome poem i have one that i may post if its ok with u can u send me a pm iwould love it if u will read it and tell me if it worthy to put up here if u want to go to www.ayjw.com and serch for cem or Serch for The Deepest pit of poverty __________________ Rikku's Lover
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