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Reply With QuoteThe repetition is cute. More elaboration and imagery. ^-^
The child of peace.
A child only knows peace and happiness,
A child only wants to have fun and love,
A girl only wants to grow up,
A girl only wants to have friends,
A woman only wants to fall in love,
A woman only wants a blessed child,
A child only wants their mother of peace.
this is my frist poem so any comment will be great.
Last edited by nightboyz; Oct 31, 2006 at 08:47 AM.
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The repetition is cute. More elaboration and imagery. ^-^
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Thanks For you two cents ill work on it. Ill see what I can do.
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