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    Childhood Euphoria

    Glancing back one Summer's day,
    Smiles and laughter are in the air.

    Eyes are wide open and full of joy,
    Our hearts dance with the sun.

    Carelessness and adventure surely follow,
    Racing to the beat and making dreams.

    Learning lifes lessons,
    Enjoying the simpler things.

    Playing the game,
    Chasing fame.

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: Childhood Euphoria

    Short and Sweet, I love it. I felt it captured the sense of being a child pretty well.

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    Thanks I tried to keep it short and vivid

    Sure do miss being a kid!

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    Re: Childhood Euphoria

    Can't really go back >.< sheesh...

    Love the descriptions ^^ very neat and the flow was good.. short and sweet as beast mentioned... but... why fame? Usually kids look for attention... o.o

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    Re: Childhood Euphoria

    Ahh, to be a child again. Great poem by the way, structure was awesome.

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    Re: Childhood Euphoria

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Can't really go back >.< sheesh...

    Love the descriptions ^^ very neat and the flow was good.. short and sweet as beast mentioned... but... why fame? Usually kids look for attention... o.o
    You answered yourself RayMe :P

    And thanks guys I just started poetry officially as a hobby so its good to know people like it.

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    Re: Childhood Euphoria

    Lol, nice RayMe. And yeah, great job with this... The happiness hurt my head... >x< (The good way)

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    Re: Childhood Euphoria

    Quote Originally Posted by Sabishii View Post
    Lol, nice RayMe. And yeah, great job with this... The happiness hurt my head... >x< (The good way)
    Hah happiness shouldn't hurt everyone loves to be happy

    Its good to see my poem is hurting people I just hope no one melts from it :P

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