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![]() | A Child's Fantasia... This is one of the first poems I had written when I first got here on AO... Thanks to *Peach* & the "Who likes Disney..." thread reminded me of this poem that I wrote about my childhood... I liked it & I wanted to share it with you all again cause this is one of few of my poems that brought back GREAT memories... I changed it a lil' from the 1st one I wrote (SORRY *Peach* lol) & I apologize for it being kind of lengthy... It probably would of been longer if I added all of my childhood games, movies, & t.v. shows ^_^ lol ... I hope you enjoy & can relate to some of the activities, movies/shows... One day I just sat & trip Thinking & remembering bout' the old days I miss Growing up way back then Or should I say way back when Blood was thicker than water Even with your friends Treated them all the same like they was your kin Those was the better days I call em' see you later days If time stayed still I would keep it no other way Back then games was better played Who could forget about hiding go get it Chasing that one person who you always wanted to be with Even the young ones got down & legit You would play house & already know what it was about "You be the mother & I be the father" Don't let you have anyone else who wants to play Cause they can be a bother So what do you do ..? You make them your kids a.k.a. the munchkins You lay them down to sleep So mom & dad can do the grown up thing a.k.a the hunchin' Around that time one of my favorite songs was out called "Creep" All thanks to Crazy Sexy Cool by TLC Some was a lil grown for their age Skipped a whole step & already got laid But aye' what can I say Nothin' really, but them was the good ol' days I call em' see you later days Wouldn't change anything wouldn't have it any other way Tag became freeze so I was froze at where I stayed Everyone had fun when it came to manhunt You would just pick your team And make sure they was either good at hiding Or quick on the scene I could never forget about getting dangerous with that duck called Darkwing He seems to always prevail Or how about me wishing I was rich Like Scrooge McDuck from Ducktales Me wanting to be a Rescue Ranger Like them two buddies Chip & Dale No case was too big or small All you had to do was make that call And they did what it do to just solve Back then that is when Disney was on the ball I can admit I was a lil loon when it came to Tiny Toons I thought I was a performer like Hammer Time And a top dawg Transformer like Optimus Prime I carried around anything that looks like a sword Cause I wanted to be the man "By the power of Greyskull" like He-Man I wanted to protect everything I loved, owned, & shared Just like I was a Care Bear You can call me soft or whatever I'll be that I can also be strong like Panthro from them ThunderCats I can be mysterious & a loner like The Bat Also known as the dark night protector I enjoyed the laugh of that crazed bird Woody Wood Pecker I wished upon a star to be taken to NeverLand Where I can be free & fly with the Lostboys, Tinkerbell & Peterpan There I would meet my Beauty who tamed the Beast Both of us had the desire to be free We both probably done lost a love one like Bambi But in the end it was meant to be You can call this a Fantasia my magical fantasy My childhood that was made But also done part ways Them was the better days I call em' see you later days *Thinking* SWEET MEMORIES!!! ^_^ lol |
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![]() | Re: A Child's Fantasia... WOAH...They ARE sweet memories!!! It's awsome...every LINE!!! *claps* I love the way you wrote and I would love to read more from you ^_^
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![]() ![]() | Re: A Child's Fantasia... My my @.@ nice childhood good poem this 1 ^^ told a nice story of urs.. keep up the good work ^^ |
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![]() | Re: A Child's Fantasia... Awesome!!!!!!! That would take a year for me to write it!!!!!!!! Nicely done!!!!!
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![]() | Re: A Child's Fantasia... Quote:
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Naw' I don't think it would of took you that long, unless you try to put every moment in your childhood even then it might be a little longer *jk*... Never sell yourself short cause in the end you don't know how much you're worth... Well thanks for the compliment I very much 'ppreciate it... I hope to see some of your work whatever it might be ^_^... | ||
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