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    A Child's Fantasia...

    This is one of the first poems I had written when I first got here on AO... Thanks to *Peach* & the "Who likes Disney..." thread reminded me of this poem that I wrote about my childhood... I liked it & I wanted to share it with you all again cause this is one of few of my poems that brought back GREAT memories... I changed it a lil' from the 1st one I wrote (SORRY *Peach* lol) & I apologize for it being kind of lengthy... It probably would of been longer if I added all of my childhood games, movies, & t.v. shows ^_^ lol ... I hope you enjoy & can relate to some of the activities, movies/shows...

    One day I just sat & trip
    Thinking & remembering bout' the old days I miss
    Growing up way back then
    Or should I say way back when
    Blood was thicker than water
    Even with your friends

    Treated them all the same like they was your kin
    Those was the better days I call em' see you later days
    If time stayed still I would keep it no other way

    Back then games was better played
    Who could forget about hiding go get it
    Chasing that one person who you always wanted to be with
    Even the young ones got down & legit

    You would play house & already know what it was about
    "You be the mother & I be the father"
    Don't let you have anyone else who wants to play
    Cause they can be a bother
    So what do you do ..?

    You make them your kids a.k.a. the munchkins
    You lay them down to sleep
    So mom & dad can do the grown up thing a.k.a the hunchin'
    Around that time one of my favorite songs was out called "Creep"
    All thanks to Crazy Sexy Cool by TLC

    Some was a lil grown for their age
    Skipped a whole step & already got laid
    But aye' what can I say
    Nothin' really, but them was the good ol' days

    I call em' see you later days
    Wouldn't change anything wouldn't have it any other way
    Tag became freeze so I was froze at where I stayed

    Everyone had fun when it came to manhunt
    You would just pick your team
    And make sure they was either good at hiding
    Or quick on the scene

    I could never forget about getting dangerous with that duck called Darkwing
    He seems to always prevail
    Or how about me wishing I was rich
    Like Scrooge McDuck from Ducktales

    Me wanting to be a Rescue Ranger
    Like them two buddies Chip & Dale
    No case was too big or small
    All you had to do was make that call
    And they did what it do to just solve
    Back then that is when Disney was on the ball

    I can admit I was a lil loon when it came to Tiny Toons
    I thought I was a performer like Hammer Time
    And a top dawg Transformer like Optimus Prime

    I carried around anything that looks like a sword
    Cause I wanted to be the man
    "By the power of Greyskull" like He-Man
    I wanted to protect everything I loved, owned, & shared
    Just like I was a Care Bear

    You can call me soft or whatever I'll be that
    I can also be strong like Panthro from them ThunderCats
    I can be mysterious & a loner like The Bat
    Also known as the dark night protector
    I enjoyed the laugh of that crazed bird Woody Wood Pecker

    I wished upon a star to be taken to NeverLand
    Where I can be free & fly with the Lostboys, Tinkerbell & Peterpan
    There I would meet my Beauty who tamed the Beast
    Both of us had the desire to be free

    We both probably done lost a love one like Bambi
    But in the end it was meant to be
    You can call this a Fantasia my magical fantasy
    My childhood that was made

    But also done part ways
    Them was the better days
    I call em' see you later days

    *Thinking* SWEET MEMORIES!!! ^_^ lol

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    Re: A Child's Fantasia...

    WOAH...They ARE sweet memories!!! It's awsome...every LINE!!! *claps* I love the way you wrote and I would love to read more from you ^_^

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    Re: A Child's Fantasia...

    My my @.@ nice childhood good poem this 1 ^^ told a nice story of urs.. keep up the good work ^^

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    Re: A Child's Fantasia...

    Awesome!!!!!!!
    That would take a year for me to write it!!!!!!!!
    Nicely done!!!!!
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    Re: A Child's Fantasia...

    Quote Originally Posted by ihauntforlust View Post
    WOAH...They ARE sweet memories!!! It's awsome...every LINE!!! *claps* I love the way you wrote and I would love to read more from you ^_^
    I also thought they were sweet memories ^_^ lol, thanks for the support of me work... I try *takes bow* naw' I am not that conceited... I am just showing my 'ppreciation you have for the work I've done...

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    My my @.@ nice childhood good poem this 1 ^^ told a nice story of urs.. keep up the good work ^^
    I think you are the only one who saw that it was a mini story I've told in poem form of a HOT 60 seconds (it probably took that long to read it) ^_^ lol, but thanks a million for the compliment... I have to keep up with some of the good work you produce in the poem section... *compliment<>smile* ^_^

    Quote Originally Posted by Astaroth View Post
    Awesome!!!!!!!
    That would take a year for me to write it!!!!!!!!
    Nicely done!!!!!
    Naw' I don't think it would of took you that long, unless you try to put every moment in your childhood even then it might be a little longer *jk*... Never sell yourself short cause in the end you don't know how much you're worth... Well thanks for the compliment I very much 'ppreciate it... I hope to see some of your work whatever it might be ^_^...

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