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  1. Jul 20, 2007 01:25 PM #1
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    Chillax with good chi, the flow and the beat.

    **I've had all kinds of random thoughts today, so I figured I'd write what I'm thinkin'. Since I can't keep my mind focused.**

    Chillin'...
    That's what you see me doin'.

    Illin'...
    Better to do that, than be shootin'.

    Relax...
    Just get that monkey off your back.

    Calm down...
    Why are you trippin'? Are you on crack?

    Good Chi...
    Is all a person really needs.

    Bad Chi...
    Get rid of all that negativity.

    The flow...
    Go with it, and don't you stop.

    The beat...
    Listen to it until your head pops.

    Word...
    Is my bond, and I will not break it.

    Honor...
    It is mine and no one can take it.

    War...
    We're in it because Bush is a jerk.

    Peace...
    'Cause I'm out, I gotta go back to work.

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    Re: Chillax with good chi, the flow and the beat.

    awesome, simple with great flow and conclusive ending
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    Re: Chillax with good chi, the flow and the beat.

    Yeah, I agree...

    It's a nice, simple, flowing poem that describes most of the world's problems.

    I also like the end because it seems like its they everyday, middle-class worker's problems and he's trying to express his concern.

    Nice job!


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    Re: Chillax with good chi, the flow and the beat.

    Quote Originally Posted by kamikazekrn View Post
    awesome, simple with great flow and conclusive ending
    Quote Originally Posted by ILikeApples5520 View Post
    Yeah, I agree...

    It's a nice, simple, flowing poem that describes most of the world's problems.

    I also like the end because it seems like its they everyday, middle-class worker's problems and he's trying to express his concern.

    Nice job!
    Thanks to the both of you! ^_^ As always, I appreciate your comments. It means a bunch to me.

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