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Aug 06, 2007, 07:13 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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 Credits: 6,168 | Choice Falling into Darkness Rising into light I'll never leave This endless plight To help my neighbor To strike him down In the middle I just might drown Looking up at Heaven Glaring down at Hell Both of them enchant me... Their everlasting spell To foster peace To go to war Both of them truly seem Tempting to implore Praising generosity Spreading dreadful hate Will I be a godly man Or Evil Incarnate? Good chi and bad Yang and Yin No matter the choices I'll never win This is a repost of my POTM submission. Please tell me what you thought of it. P.S. The last stanza was a last minute addition. (If anyone thinks the poem would be better off without it, please lemme know)
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Aug 06, 2007, 07:19 PM
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  PIGGY!!  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Chicago
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Credits: 15,852 | Re: Choice If you've already posted this in the POTM forum, there's no need for it here. POTM entries are already open for replies. Also, per the rules: Quote:
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