Well, if you wanted Ryme, here's something I cooked up real quick.
Submission into the transition of vision,
A missed mission of slit throat correction.
a section of the election set to transfixion.
A precision treason of reasoned corruption.
I choke on your lies.
Religious tyrants preach death,
Politicians condemn what’s left.
The shelves scream with empty spaces,
As consumers consume all traces.
This land of the free is a waste,
Come ye ole gullible – Taste.
And have faith in the phrase,
“Freedom in all ways”
Our way is what they say,
God forbid thoughts to stray,
We march on, robots in guise,
And conform to the infinite lies.
Ooooooooooooh! That was cold. Marvelous! That just made me a permenant fan. This would make for some raw lyrics.
I mean... you made my jaw drop...
Glad to see I have a fan ^.^.. thanks!
And I wish I could write lyrics :(
Very good a bit creepy but hell whats this site for well done 4/5 stars
Creepy? It was about the government choking the shit out of us, choking our wallets, choking our pay checks, squeezing out every inch of a penny they can, just to get their jollies off while others lay at home half starved fighting to keep their house.
No need to wish... You basically DID write lyrics... all you need is a beat or a kick ass guitar riff, And you've have a song. Possibly even a hit! It was that good!
Originally Posted by -=Broken^Halo=-
well, didn't know it was THAT good. Perhaps I will put it to some really awesome guitar licks, all Rage Against the Machine style. They're my inspiration @.@... listen to them. NOW! :P