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    Choke it Down

    All the time and every time,
    You choke it down.
    The words you feel,
    and want to say.
    The food you eat,
    and want to taste.

    But you always choke it down.

    Forced to swolow.
    Never on your own.
    Forced to eat it.
    Its all the Abuse you take.

    I see your bruises,
    And I see Your cuts.
    They treat you like a dirty slut.

    Soft slender lips.
    Big glassy eyes.

    Your their biggest and most important...
    Pirze.

    Run away with me and you won't choke it down.
    Run away with me And there'll be no 'lost and found'
    Forever Yours

    ~Eli~

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    Re: Choke it Down

    Quote Originally Posted by The_Pox_Party View Post
    All the time and every time,
    You choke it down.
    The words you feel,
    and want to say.
    The food you eat,
    and want to taste.

    But you always choke it down.

    Forced to swolow.
    Never on your own.
    Forced to eat it.
    Its all the Abuse you take.

    I see your bruises,
    And I see Your cuts.
    They treat you like a dirty slut.

    Soft slender lips.
    Big glassy eyes.

    Your their biggest and most important...
    Pirze.

    Run away with me and you won't choke it down.
    Run away with me And there'll be no 'lost and found'
    Forever Yours

    ~Eli~
    thats pretty darn good there buddy, i cant right a good poem like this....T.T


    -".. Chase the morning, yield for nothing."

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    Re: Choke it Down

    -pride- ok its gone...I am trying to get my stories and poems published i have found sevral places that could to it but then again maybe i don't want to.... Thank you for you complimant. I am sure you could write something just as good....

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    Re: Choke it Down

    *surpise look* sounds like forcing someone to do something that they dont want to do, really good and a little alright lol

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    Re: Choke it Down

    now thats a poem !

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    Re: Choke it Down

    MWAHAHAHA oh wait no....-happy for a second- thank you I hope i can post more to please you....(anyone who likes it)

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