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This world, strange
Destany, unexpected
And people unpredictable
Who could have thought things could trun around in such an instant ?
Call it fate
It's humanity's only true mate
And the opening of everybodies fate
Fate that unknown date
As simple as sitting near lake
Everything could turn out just fake
not i nor you could give this life a rate
It's too late
To turn down fate
The dicision we choose builds our fate
And some of us could never throw away his hate towards his gate entitled
"Your Fate"
but wait ...
It's not for those nor for anybody to decide where we end up and with who we might end up with
My hands are the same as yours
We build our own future , our own fates
And we may sameday see our fate being destroyed by our destany
But as for destany , it builds it self from our fates
Never surrender to your destany
You choose the path you walk in
With your own hands , Your own will
My friend , live to see that future And
Choose Your Fate
And Build Your Destany

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Kasai

Spelling anf punctuation. ^^ And perhaps some sentence stucture is needed.

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HieisLove

I like this poem. Its good. For some reason, I love this part:

You choose the path you walk in
With your own hands , Your own will
My friend , live to see that future And
Choose Your Fate
And Build Your Destany

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