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    Choosing.....

    Caught between two choices
    I don't know which to pick
    If I pick one,
    What will happen to the other?

    Too hard of a choice
    One needs me
    One can't let go
    But I have to choose

    People always say to
    Trust my heart
    But it's so mixed up
    With so many emotions

    I must choose one soon
    Or else they'll find out
    So I made a desition
    I hope it's the right one.....
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    Re: Choosing.....

    Hmm... not a bad poem..choices..thats a famous theme in poems ^^ i made one once...
    and i know how it feels... :/ good job..

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    Re: Choosing.....

    good job! i especially like the theme..choices... it reminded me of old times.. i would love to read more^^

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    Re: Choosing.....

    Good poem Akura. . . It reminds me of a time not too long ago. . .

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    Re: Choosing.....

    Very good.I know someone(Be sides you)Who has the same problem.But anyway very good poem.Very good topic as well.

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    Re: Choosing.....

    I like this. The writing was a little shakey, but practice makes perfect. I identify with the feelings expressed here heavily however. I know exactly how you must have felt while writing this. An expression of your heart never sucks, even if it's badly worded. So don't use that term for it. Maybe it's not your best. But it doesn't suck. It touched me and I like it very much. Seems like in these situations no matter which choice you make your wrong though, huh?

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    Re: Choosing.....

    very good sis i know we have to choose between CANDY sometimes but i love this poem.very good description .keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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