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  1. Sep 28, 2007 06:07 AM #1
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    this is my first poem I have written, so please go easy on me!
    this poem came to me while I was doodling.

    Click, click, bang.

    Why do we live our lives in such fear?
    We fear for all that is dear
    Violence is all around
    Putting people in the ground

    Click, click, bang goes the gun
    Even while we have sun
    Murder, rape when will it end?
    This is the message we must send

    There is a gun held to my head
    There is nothing more to be said
    Click, Click, Bang.
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  2. Sep 29, 2007 02:01 AM #2
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    Re: Click, click, bang

    Hmmm this is good...a concerened guy yay~! another like me.. im more to environmentalist..
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    COOL and an AWSOME poem,
    it's short but it has a very good rhyming scheme and it made me to continue reading it

    And yes i agree fully with the poem.... X.X good luck with excaping the gun :P
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  4. Sep 29, 2007 08:44 AM #4
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    Re: Click, click, bang

    thanx, both of you.
    I really thought that this would not be very good.
    but I had to post it... so I guess I can get good poems.
    again thanx for reading it.
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  5. Sep 29, 2007 09:04 AM #5
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    Re: Click, click, bang

    hey nice poem. its short but its very good. i really like it.

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