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Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,215 | Clouds On a blue lit canvass, they float by. Together in the same big sky. Its like they're dancing just for me. A mountain of cotton, or marshmellow sea. Sunset turns them into shades of violet-blue and pink. With its rise, they smear like yellow paint, blotched with crimson ink. So many sizes so many shapes. Looks like a ballon, or bundle of grapes. Sometimes they puff like popcorn balls skattered above my head. Other times they spread out smooth, like pillows and a bed. Each one that passes, represents a minute that has past. How time goes by, looking in the sky. As I lay here in the grass. |
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![]() Credits: 49,192 | Re: Clouds A great poem!!! It's just what I'm thinking about all the time.. to lie in the grass and watch the clouds go by would be sooo nice... I love this line: "Each one that passes, represents a minute that has past." Beautifully said!!! A nice work... hmm... it's really good... hmmm... *looks at the emptiness around* strange... did all people have a bad day on 15th of June? |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,212 | Re: Clouds Quote:
is really awesome i like it alot you really are great as wording things in your poems. and using paint was really cool | |
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