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    Clouds

    On a blue lit canvass, they float by.
    Together in the same big sky.
    Its like they're dancing just for me.
    A mountain of cotton, or marshmellow sea.

    Sunset turns them into shades of violet-blue and pink.
    With its rise, they smear like yellow paint, blotched with crimson ink.

    So many sizes so many shapes.
    Looks like a ballon, or bundle of grapes.
    Sometimes they puff like popcorn balls skattered above my head.
    Other times they spread out smooth, like pillows and a bed.

    Each one that passes, represents a minute that has past.
    How time goes by, looking in the sky. As I lay here in the grass.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Clouds

    A great poem!!! It's just what I'm thinking about all the time.. to lie in the grass and watch the clouds go by would be sooo nice...

    I love this line: "Each one that passes, represents a minute that has past."
    Beautifully said!!!

    A nice work... hmm... it's really good... hmmm... *looks at the emptiness around* strange... did all people have a bad day on 15th of June?

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Clouds

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    A great poem!!! It's just what I'm thinking about all the time.. to lie in the grass and watch the clouds go by would be sooo nice...

    I love this line: "Each one that passes, represents a minute that has past."
    Beautifully said!!!

    A nice work... hmm... it's really good... hmmm... *looks at the emptiness around* strange... did all people have a bad day on 15th of June?
    If they did... then the poetry forum would be flooded with depressing poems today
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Clouds

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    If they did... then the poetry forum would be flooded with depressing poems today
    yeah they wuld have but this poem
    is really awesome i like it alot you
    really are great as wording things
    in your poems. and using paint
    was really cool
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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