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    Cloven Bridge

    Mr. Zebra why do you speak in tounges?

    Where's the man with the beard
    who promised us love?

    Lord, I am yours to choose.

    The 409 building hot the kids with mutations made of
    sin, where is their promised peace?

    With a heavy heart I will sit
    back and watch this world die.

    Lord, we're yours to find.

    The apple tree is plentiful,
    we've all eaten some.

    The river is lush,
    we've all drank from.

    Mr. Zebra, why do you speak in tounges?

    I'm walking over this run-down bridge
    and thinking of mother earth's unfulfilled promises,
    and hera's lies.

    Lord, I'm far too gone.

    Should I have held on tighter?
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Cloven Bridge

    ahhhhh why do keep reading these poem there gonna make bust a tear great poem ill love to read another

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    Re: Cloven Bridge

    Aww, thank you so much ^-^. Do you write poetry, if you do I would be glad to check out some of your stuff
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Cloven Bridge

    i may send you in the pm but im way to bad to post them in the threads

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    Re: Cloven Bridge

    Oh I bet they're not ^-^
    Sure you can send them to me in a PM...do you mind if I add you to my friends list?
    Dear Dinah...

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    Re: Cloven Bridge

    I love this poem!!!! It's so joyful to read! It seems so sad a to me as well but I love reading your poems their always so great! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Cloven Bridge

    no i dont mind i love your reading you poems im always looking for them

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    Yay...I feel so important now ^-^...you should send me some of your poetry some time..I am sure it's good
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