Thread: Coast.

ummmm i dont know what to say but didnt someone make a song like this i forget his name but honestly i didnt like it that much and im shocked i have to say that im sorry

Well I myself liked it. Made me feel...light. Happy like. It's kinda hard to do lately all things considered. But again with the attempt at optimisim. I like the light thing though. THanks for writing this.

Thanks you guys! I didn't really like this one either, and when I read it after writing it, it did sound like a song in my head. It almost reminds me of that "kick-push" song; I can't remember who does it.

Anyway, thanks for commenting on my mediocre poem. Hopefully, some better stuff will come out my head today. ^_^

very radical poem pictures of
relaxing and letting the day go
by at its own pace while you just
sit back with your cold drink with a smile.

this poem realy does bring out the
lazy days and i like that .

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

very radical poem pictures of
relaxing and letting the day go
by at its own pace while you just
sit back with your cold drink with a smile.

this poem realy does bring out the
lazy days and i like that .

Thank you! ^_^ I'm glad someone liked it!

The way I look at it, you can either hurry through life, or just put it in neutral and... Coast. (For a lack of better words, LOL.) I try to just let life happen. There's no point in rushing, y'know? ^_^

hmm... this is like a song.. cool... simple one ^^ nicely done though.. good job..
^^ keep up the good work