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    Cold Affection

    The crackling fire,
    Burns against your icy beauty.
    Those stone cold eyes,
    Send shivers through my spine.
    Your piercing glare,
    Penetrates my soul;
    As if your devouring it.
    Your melodic voice,
    Can raise up a revolution with just one word.
    That flawless body,
    Can make any artist go insane with perfection.
    With just one touch,
    Can be torture to my body alone.
    I want to hold you close,
    But you turn away from my fingertips.
    Your cold affection drives me wild,
    You bring me to my knees yearning for you;
    "I'm going to make you mine, forever."
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    ooh,i've fallen again,I think..lol

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Cold Affection

    That reminded me of being happy with someone. But because it has been such a long long time ago for me. It was almost a bit painful to read. I suppose its fair to say I'm jealous.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Cold Affection

    Hmmm... interesting... you know somehow it seemed to me as if a guy has writen it about a girl- maybe because it has so much passion in it that it seems strange to come from a girl... I guess you rally have fallen ^^ Very real emotions...

    I liked this poem very much, but that's no wonder at all- I like everything by you! ^^ Nice work! I will be waiting forward for more ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Cold Affection

    this is a really nice poem. such emotion coming from a girl which mostly this comes from a guy. but o well its awesome anywayz. keep up the good work!

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