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    Angelic Lasura may be famous one day Lasura's Avatar
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    Cold as ice

    I don’t understand what you mean
    When you say you love me

    I don’t understand what you want from me
    When you say you need me

    I don’t understand what you’re looking for
    When you stand at my door

    I don’t understand why you’re doing this
    When you cry down on your knees

    I don’t understand why you love me
    When my heart is as cold as ice to you

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Cold as ice

    Um....thats kinda deep,but Preetty goodly kewl.

    Though That's realy bland in a way I could explain....

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    Re: Cold as ice

    Thank You very much Sepulchure!!! Well, yeah, when I read it again now, it really seems kind of bland... hmm... when I wrote it I though it would sound really evil..

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Cold as ice

    Go Lasura! You poem was deep as it was said. You should make more for your fans. Hope to see more later.
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    Re: Cold as ice

    too short but very deep and in same time it's very nice ....keep up and up ...

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    Re: Cold as ice

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    Go Lasura! You poem was deep as it was said. You should make more for your fans. Hope to see more later.
    Wow!!! I have fans? *hugs* Miracles do happen... I thik I'll writte more... will see...

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    too short but very deep and in same time it's very nice ....keep up and up ...
    Ok, I'll do so! Thank you!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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