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    Cold Life

    Open up my heart
    Let me breathe
    Please heal my soul

    Do you understand me?
    Why do you take this as a misunderstanding?
    Why cant you see it?

    Rather or not you believe it
    Oh please you'll never.....
    You don't understand

    Give me your warmth
    Bless me with your love
    One tear I cry become a thousand tears

    I lived in the cold darkness
    Your warmth seemed to gave me life and a light
    As a punishment, a strike across my skin
    A piece of life taken away
    Drops of blood on the cold floor

    As I lay on that cold floor
    I pray for more of your love
    I stare with sleepless, lifeless eyes
    Still I ask why

    Even so through all
    I still say......
    Thank you
    Last edited by HieisLove; Jul 09, 2006 at 03:47 PM.
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    Re: Cold Life

    WOW it was just as good as the first one
    keep them comeing

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    Re: Cold Life

    I liked it it starts off like someone is confused and unsure of what they want but grow to realize what they wantas it goes on! Or something!
    Anyway its good and don't stop just cause my message is confusing I liked it but that doesn't come accross which is why I don't post poetry and stuff!

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    Re: Cold Life

    Thanks for the comment you two. I hope I get more
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    Re: Cold Life

    Yaa I love the Start too but I don't know why I just love it.

    and for the rest I liked it are you Going to make more???

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    Re: Cold Life

    Yeah, I'll just to get an idea first.................
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    Re: Cold Life

    When I get another idea, I'll post it
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    Re: Cold Life

    good poem. keep up the good work

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