Shinigami's_Angel

Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

I was so alone, I had nowhere to go
But once I met you, Everything fell into place
Your warming embrace, And soft kissess
I was once in pieces, But now i'm whole...

" You've put me back together "

Crying while lost in the rain, They all had left me behind
But you came to my aid, And bandaged me up
You took away the pain with every touch, Wiped away my tears with a kiss
Held in your arms is where I feel most safe, Could I stay here forever?...

" Would you hold me tightly and never let go? "

Wandering this world so lost inside, You are my light
The only reason why i'm still alive, Is because of you
You took my hand and said it was alright, As you sealed your promise with a kiss
I melt with just one touch, Could this be what they all call " Love " ?...

" Can I still fall in love? "

So many times i've been hurt, It's a wonder how I still have a heart
But then I felt your's beat along with mine, We're we ment to meet?
Could this be what they call destiny, Is this the so called " fate " ?
I think so but do you, Do you believe in any of these?...

"Could you believe if it were for me? "

When I hear your voice, I can bearly contain myself
When i'm sad and down, You always make me smile and never frown
You always know what to say to make me laugh, And to never cry
If i'm ever lonely all I gotta do is think of you, And I can't help to softly smile...

" Your the reason for my smiles, no one else "

My life was once nothing but pain, But you opened my eyes to a world outside
I was once so cold, Could never chase away this awful chill
When you took ahold of my hand, I become so hot inside
I thougth maybe there was something wrong with me, Till I realized it was all cause of you...

" You are the one to warm me up on cold nights "

I was so alone, I had nowhere to go..no one wanted me
But once I met you, Everything fell into place..it all changed
Your warming embrace, And soft kissess..filled me with such happiness
I was once in pieces, But now i'm whole..it's all cause of you...

" You put me back together, You've made me whole "

Crying while lost in the rain, They all had left me behind..so cold
But you came to my aid, And bandaged me up..gave me the warmth I needed
You took away the pain with every touch, Wiped away my tears with a kiss..you've healed my old scars
Held in your arms is where I feel most safe, Could I stay here forever?..Or do I have to leave?...

" Would you hold me tightly and never let go? I don't wish to ever leave your side "

I never shed a tear when i'm with you, All I can do is smile with all my heart
Hand in hand I feel so loved, Kissess that are so sweet I can't get enough
No longer any pain in my heart, It's only filled with you
You chased away all of my pain, It's all cause you...and only you...


" In the cold rain, an angel came and chased away all of my pain...and that angel...was you. "

These are my newest lyrics (yay 2 in 2 day, awesome!). I wrote thise for someone very close 2 my heart...someone who I have special feelings for (ya know who ya are lol) *blushes*. Anyways please tell me what ya'll all think of it kk? ^__^ *bows* Please enjoy!!

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fireandice

wow.. you know I couldn't of said it better myself... but you forgot giggling like a school girl..lol It's very well written and you can feel how you really feel about this person. The emotion from this one says it all. Also to add the element of fate playing a roll was nicely done. I think everyone thinks of that when they look at love and wonders 'if' they didn't... etc.. great good keep it up angel.. they seem to be getting better and better.

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Shinigami's_Angel

^///^ I'm soooooo happy!! *HUGS* I'm so glad ya liked it so much!! I was sooooo worried it sucked Lol. Yeah, I did forget that part lol. Wow, really? Awesome!! Yeah it feels like fate has brought "that person" 2 me ^///^. Really? Well I try my best and always try 2 out-do my last work, so i'm glad ya think so!! Thanks again Fai!! ^___^

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CherryBlossom18

very sweet poem Sis! It would be so wonderful to find someone to love you like that. To make you feel wanted,needed,and safe. I've came close to having a love like this,but it never really happened so I'm hoping to get lucky one day.

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Shinigami's_Angel

Thanks!! I'm sooooooooo glad ya liked it Sis!!! *HUGS* Well I think I may have found that such person (and it's not "him") so it inspired me 2 write this. Thanks again for reading & commenting on my newest work!!! ^___^

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