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    Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

    I was so alone, I had nowhere to go
    But once I met you, Everything fell into place
    Your warming embrace, And soft kissess
    I was once in pieces, But now i'm whole...


    " You've put me back together "

    Crying while lost in the rain, They all had left me behind
    But you came to my aid, And bandaged me up
    You took away the pain with every touch, Wiped away my tears with a kiss
    Held in your arms is where I feel most safe, Could I stay here forever?...


    " Would you hold me tightly and never let go? "

    Wandering this world so lost inside, You are my light
    The only reason why i'm still alive, Is because of you
    You took my hand and said it was alright, As you sealed your promise with a kiss
    I melt with just one touch, Could this be what they all call " Love " ?...


    " Can I still fall in love? "

    So many times i've been hurt, It's a wonder how I still have a heart
    But then I felt your's beat along with mine, We're we ment to meet?
    Could this be what they call destiny, Is this the so called " fate " ?
    I think so but do you, Do you believe in any of these?...


    "Could you believe if it were for me? "


    When I hear your voice, I can bearly contain myself
    When i'm sad and down, You always make me smile and never frown
    You always know what to say to make me laugh, And to never cry
    If i'm ever lonely all I gotta do is think of you, And I can't help to softly smile...


    " Your the reason for my smiles, no one else "

    My life was once nothing but pain, But you opened my eyes to a world outside
    I was once so cold, Could never chase away this awful chill
    When you took ahold of my hand, I become so hot inside
    I thougth maybe there was something wrong with me, Till I realized it was all cause of you...


    " You are the one to warm me up on cold nights "

    I was so alone, I had nowhere to go..no one wanted me
    But once I met you, Everything fell into place..it all changed
    Your warming embrace, And soft kissess..filled me with such happiness
    I was once in pieces, But now i'm whole..it's all cause of you...


    " You put me back together, You've made me whole "

    Crying while lost in the rain, They all had left me behind..so cold
    But you came to my aid, And bandaged me up..gave me the warmth I needed
    You took away the pain with every touch, Wiped away my tears with a kiss..you've healed my old scars
    Held in your arms is where I feel most safe, Could I stay here forever?..Or do I have to leave?...


    " Would you hold me tightly and never let go? I don't wish to ever leave your side "

    I never shed a tear when i'm with you, All I can do is smile with all my heart
    Hand in hand I feel so loved, Kissess that are so sweet I can't get enough
    No longer any pain in my heart, It's only filled with you
    You chased away all of my pain, It's all cause you...and only you...



    " In the cold rain, an angel came and chased away all of my pain...and that angel...was you. "


    These are my newest lyrics (yay 2 in 2 day, awesome!). I wrote thise for someone very close 2 my heart...someone who I have special feelings for (ya know who ya are lol) *blushes*. Anyways please tell me what ya'll all think of it kk? ^__^ *bows* Please enjoy!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    So many times i've been hurt, It's a wonder how I still have a heart
    But then I felt your's beat along with mine, We're we ment to meet?
    Could this be what they call destiny, Is this the so called " fate " ?
    I think so but do you, Do you believe in any of these?...


    "Could you believe if it were for me? "


    When I hear your voice, I can bearly contain myself
    When i'm sad and down, You always make me smile and never frown
    You always know what to say to make me laugh, And to never cry
    If i'm ever lonely all I gotta do is think of you, And I can't help to softly smile...
    wow.. you know I couldn't of said it better myself... but you forgot giggling like a school girl..lol It's very well written and you can feel how you really feel about this person. The emotion from this one says it all. Also to add the element of fate playing a roll was nicely done. I think everyone thinks of that when they look at love and wonders 'if' they didn't... etc.. great good keep it up angel.. they seem to be getting better and better.

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    Re: Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

    ^///^ I'm soooooo happy!! *HUGS* I'm so glad ya liked it so much!! I was sooooo worried it sucked Lol. Yeah, I did forget that part lol. Wow, really? Awesome!! Yeah it feels like fate has brought "that person" 2 me ^///^. Really? Well I try my best and always try 2 out-do my last work, so i'm glad ya think so!! Thanks again Fai!! ^___^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

    very sweet poem Sis! It would be so wonderful to find someone to love you like that. To make you feel wanted,needed,and safe. I've came close to having a love like this,but it never really happened so I'm hoping to get lucky one day.
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: Cold Rain..Angel Chased Away My Pain...

    Thanks!! I'm sooooooooo glad ya liked it Sis!!! *HUGS* Well I think I may have found that such person (and it's not "him") so it inspired me 2 write this. Thanks again for reading & commenting on my newest work!!! ^___^
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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