I like how you used the image of a living ghost to symbolize a person bereft.
Walking in the snow at night,
Not leaving any footsteps behind
Like a ghost,almost levitating,
This pain is so irritating.
As the sad snow starts to fall,
I feel like I'm backed to the wall
It's hard to forget,hard to believe
That you're gone,not here anymore with me.
Another poem I wrote
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I like how you used the image of a living ghost to symbolize a person bereft.
Last edited by beast; Apr 21, 2010 at 03:28 PM.
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