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    Cold Sadness

    Walking in the snow at night,
    Not leaving any footsteps behind
    Like a ghost,almost levitating,
    This pain is so irritating.

    As the sad snow starts to fall,
    I feel like I'm backed to the wall
    It's hard to forget,hard to believe
    That you're gone,not here anymore with me.

    Another poem I wrote
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    Re: Cold Sadness

    I like how you used the image of a living ghost to symbolize a person bereft.
    Last edited by beast; Apr 21, 2010 at 03:28 PM.

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