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PHOENIX

Far away in an enchanted land
Skies so blue and plains so white
A flame begins to dwindle
And the phoenix dies

Deep in a nest of cinnamon
A bright fire ignites
Flaming soul is reborn
A legend born at last

Up from the ashes
Out of the darkness
The hellfires blaze
The phoenix is rising again

Into the sky so blue
Above the white plains
Fire spirals through the air
The phoenix is rising again

Rise into the air
Spread your wings and fly
You have been reborn
You have been granted life

Ashes showered on the city of the sun
And the phoenix is born again
We are eternal
We are immortal!

Up from the ashes
Out of the darkness
The hellfires blaze
The phoenix is rising again

Into the sky so blue
Above the white plains
Fire spirals through the air
The phoenix is rising again!

I like this one better. It's a triumphant sort of anthem, the sort of thing that would become a band's signature song. A concert opener perhaps.

There's some mythology splashed in, too.

"Ashes showered on the city of the sun
And the phoenix is born again"

The legends about the phoenix say that when a phoenix dies, a new phoenix embalms the ashes of the old one in an egg and deposits it in Heliopolis, the city of the sun, in Greece. Taken from Wiki.

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LADY VENGEANCE

I was a broken man after her death
My reason to live was taken away
Woke up every day with my heart a black hole
Drowning in a pit of sorrow and despair

Lady Vengeance took my hand that night
Enchanted me with her evil eyes
Led me from the light
Lady Vengeance be my guide

And with her guidance I learned to fight
Threw away my old life for this new way
I would destroy the one who took her life
Lady Vengeance guide me to sweet revenge

Learned to shoot a gun and defend myself
Prepared for that big night
"Kill him,"
Lady Vengeance whispers in my ear

Lady Vengeance took my hand that night
Enchanted me with her evil eyes
Led me from the light
Lady Vengeance be my guide

Revenge in my eyes
I travel to the desolate lot
Make my way to his haven
Morals mean nothing to me anymore

Breaking down all doors
Eyes crazed like those of a madman
I put the gun to his head and shout
"Repent!"

As I stare into his eyes
I see something strange
Is it fear?
Is he sorry for what he has done?

Shaking those thoughts out of my head
I pull the trigger and end it all
Floors and carpet stained bright red
I stand back against the wall

I hear Lady Vengeance cackling now
Darkness spinning all around
Did I serve justice?
Or have I become what I despise?

This song is partly based on the movie Eye for an Eye, what with the 'revenge' theme. It's mostly it's own story though. If you can't tell, Lady Vengeance is a metaphor for the desire for revenge or justice.

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LOVE AND HATE

We met on hallowed ground at the age of ten
Young and naive, the world was our playground!
Oh, what I would give to go to the times of old, back then
Try as I might, my heart was sealed forevemore

I fell in love that night under the cold blue moon
Never dreamed of being with another
My heart so high in the sky
As if on the wings of a butterfly

Fate played it's hand one cool evening
My world came crashing down that night
Discovered that truth was a lie
As my dreams are shattered fantasy comes to an end

Caught in a web of lies and deceit
I fight my way out of this darkness
My world is shattered and I don't know where to go
Wings torn off as if by a cruel child

The catacombs of the human heart and soul
Winding and twisting and turning in a thousand directions
Oh the tragedies of love and hate

I loved you more then anyone ever will
Gave my heart to you on a silver platter
You smashed that gleaming dish
Threw my heart into the void

The catacombs of the human heart and soul
Winding and twisting and turning in a thousand directions
Oh the tragedies of love and hate

You betrayed me and shattered my trust in the world
Before now I had never known heartbreak
It's done, it's over, we're through
You lead me through a labyrinth of lies
And now it's at an end

The catacombs of the human heart and soul
Winding and twisting and turning in a thousand directions
Oh the tragedies of love and hate

Waking up to a new light
I look to a brighter day
With regrown wings I take flight
Into the ever blue sky again

This is mostly a love story gone wrong. A bit based off personal experiences, but I meant for it to be a ballad about a young man who's been hurt, basically. I don't like it as much as the other two.[/color]

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