Hmm... this poem is a bit too gloomy holder.. :/
If you wanna talk about colours... make it more... "colourful"thats my opinion that is..
^^
nice poem... keep up the good work..![]()
Colours i see them everyday even a few
shades of grey but thats OK , because colours
are what make the world so wonderful so when
your feeling blue and the sky are turning grey
just think the colours make the day something different
even if its a little sad.
Rainbows how they seem so grand , how they
reach the sky so high i really do not know , but
the colours they they show through making the storm
go away , the world its so full of colours everywhere,
how i wish the colours could be alive.
Pain showing red stained grass , and black smoke
from death the colours bring meaning to everything
even if its scary the colours never seem to loos there
luster after all , things just seem so blue in a world thats
turned so grey , waiting for the rainbow to come and make
storm clouds go away....
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life is full of colours from grey cloud ti feeling blue , showing you
love someone with a red heart colours are everywhere and as long
as there are people there will be coulours always.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Hmm... this poem is a bit too gloomy holder.. :/
If you wanna talk about colours... make it more... "colourful"thats my opinion that is..
^^
nice poem... keep up the good work..![]()
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u have a pont there colours do make the world wonderful ^^
great poem easy read 10/10
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