Thread: Come~

Rayme, this poem you made sent me goosebumps... That is because you gave descriptive words that made this poem alive! *whew*. I liked your style in poem writing, ^^. The colour of the poem suits, it gave a more "dark" effect. hmmm... now after reading your poem... I would be unable to sleep earlier than I should...

I felt... that death is so inviting... the poem presented tempting details... The reader is presented with 2 options... to be taken away or run away!

But anyways, keep up your good work! I hope to read more in the future.

thx raja~! Glad u liked it

aww.. im sorry i did not meant to disturb ur sleep but i think thats good because my poem is effective ^^

Sure~! will do so

*goes cold all over* wow it's um.. different...*looks at the reaper and the door* uh... what to choose what to choose....*rubs my arms* uh... it's a um... good poem. i.. i think that i um should be going now... *runs through the door*

xD ^^ poor jamie... *grins* whats running in my thoughts anyway.. mymy..totally scared ppl.. sheesh

Oh my another scary poem by RayMe!!!lol yeah this poem was awsome!! Because you're always so great on describing good job Ray!^^

glad u think it's scary... *snears* ehehee...ty ^^ i love to describe as much as i could make my readers imagine things... like what happened to jamie earlier...