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Stop to breath
And fake a smile
It's all the same
After a while
I know that you
Are tired of
Carrying the ones
You lost
A picture to remind you
Of that terrible loss
You always hold inside of you
I hope you find your way
Back to me so
I can comfort your sadness
ehehe, a little depressing, a little happy.
Either way at least I did a little bit of happiness
For once! -.-" lol
I love this!!!!!!!!! It's just great... the thought of this poem, the request of the lyrical "me" is like.... wow! I'm quite speechless...
A really nice work Akura!!! ^^
omg you really think so? thank you so much! ehehe, I've been on a storm today with all the poems I just put up lol!
Yea... you'd better not post so many... it's hard to read them all... and if you read them now, there's nothing for today... :( plus I think it's against the rules or does the poem forum not count?Quote:
Originally Posted by Akura13
I have a whole book of poems I wrote. And I've put more than 4 before and they didn't give me any......:confused:
It seems so sad in a way and happy as well so I hope to see more of your work! It's really fascinating to read indeed! I just love your poems so I hope to see more! :D: