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    Comfort Your Sadness

    Stop to breath
    And fake a smile
    It's all the same
    After a while
    I know that you
    Are tired of
    Carrying the ones
    You lost
    A picture to remind you
    Of that terrible loss
    You always hold inside of you
    I hope you find your way
    Back to me so
    I can comfort your sadness

    ehehe, a little depressing, a little happy.
    Either way at least I did a little bit of happiness
    For once! -.-" lol



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    Re: Comfort Your Sadness

    I love this!!!!!!!!! It's just great... the thought of this poem, the request of the lyrical "me" is like.... wow! I'm quite speechless...

    A really nice work Akura!!! ^^

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    Re: Comfort Your Sadness

    omg you really think so? thank you so much! ehehe, I've been on a storm today with all the poems I just put up lol!



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    Re: Comfort Your Sadness

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    omg you really think so? thank you so much! ehehe, I've been on a storm today with all the poems I just put up lol!
    Yea... you'd better not post so many... it's hard to read them all... and if you read them now, there's nothing for today... plus I think it's against the rules or does the poem forum not count?

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    Re: Comfort Your Sadness

    I have a whole book of poems I wrote. And I've put more than 4 before and they didn't give me any......



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    Re: Comfort Your Sadness

    It seems so sad in a way and happy as well so I hope to see more of your work! It's really fascinating to read indeed! I just love your poems so I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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