Complete Love

The First day I met you
You were so fun and sweet

Not only your so beautiful
But you are always free

The last thing I ever wanted to do
Was to break your pretty smile

I never had it in me
Because you were so fragile

Baby You know I'll always love you
I'll even keep you in my heart

There is nothing in this world
That will tear us apart

Baby I want to hold you
Wrap you around my arms

I want to smell your pretty scent
and be seduced by your lovely charm

Now I'm going to stay with you
I have completely fallen in love

Now we can soar in the sky
Just like two turtle doves.

Ow its beautiful...
-wipes tears away-...
I really like it...
So full of love...
Great poem...
Full of emotion...

well like i said before i miss reading your writing just been busy lately but hope to read more from you Ne my friend.

awww how sweet^^ i needed to hear something so pretty to lift my spirits lol very good job keep it up^^
you have a gift of making your writting smooth and rhytmatic even when for the most part it doesnt rhyme. its just when you read it out loud it has the soft tone to it^^
very good.
:2thumbs: