Ow its beautiful...
-wipes tears away-...
I really like it...
So full of love...
Great poem...
Full of emotion...
The First day I met you
You were so fun and sweet
Not only your so beautiful
But you are always free
The last thing I ever wanted to do
Was to break your pretty smile
I never had it in me
Because you were so fragile
Baby You know I'll always love you
I'll even keep you in my heart
There is nothing in this world
That will tear us apart
Baby I want to hold you
Wrap you around my arms
I want to smell your pretty scent
and be seduced by your lovely charm
Now I'm going to stay with you
I have completely fallen in love
Now we can soar in the sky
Just like two turtle doves.
Ow its beautiful...
-wipes tears away-...
I really like it...
So full of love...
Great poem...
Full of emotion...
We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...
hellknight (Jan 05, 2009)
well like i said before i miss reading your writing just been busy lately but hope to read more from you Ne my friend.
"In your arms is where i will be, I love you till my forever ends."
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hellknight (Jan 06, 2009)
awww how sweet^^ i needed to hear something so pretty to lift my spirits lol very good job keep it up^^
you have a gift of making your writting smooth and rhytmatic even when for the most part it doesnt rhyme. its just when you read it out loud it has the soft tone to it^^
very good.
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