Oh wow! This is so good! I love it keep it up!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!!♥
The world is full of wonders
and full of hopes and dreams
along with full of mistery beyond imaginations
it also represents our feelings in great personalities
that heads on to our greates moments of judgment
Which is described in a good matter of ways that poeple
correspond themselves as great achievers and also long arivals
of hatred agains one another with pitiful of violence through them
everybody is full of concerns, worryness, and as well complications
that are influenced by great terror of undignified kings that they think they rule the lands of earth i do not oblige the great things they have done
because everyone here on this globe has made a great involvement and made
a great impression by everyone that some poeple follow them in there footsteps that is what makes the complications is a great experience to handle when you are involve of great heroe-ism which is very acknowledgeful to us and to others that are very well accepted into these wonders of concepts.
Hope Everyone Admires this one. ^_^
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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that was very good!! I loved itI truly understand what you were feeling when you wrote that poem!!
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It's a very great poem and i agree with you for every thing you say it in this poem ...I love it ...nice work ...keep it up..^^
Foolish beating
Wow,I was somewhat moved by it.Well that's life for you I guess^^;I enjoyed reading it by the way.
Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
Thank you very much of you into taking part of this poem to me this poem did impact me into shaping the whole society with this powerful words that has come out from my head i guess i should do good things for the community other then making it look bad my only concern is just doing good for the poeple that need help in remodeling there precious place like home, community, etc.
the only oppurtunity i can do here is just make great suggestions and as well helping others on what is convinient for them that is what my real personality is on me when i do good honest jobs for the people that needs to chape up the whole society but i do not like this whole intervention of violence from the people that only likes to take part of revenge from each other that is really unforgivable which means i want everyone to clear up violence from them just so dumb to play with.
Well i hope everyone agrees with my saying that violence around the world is not the answer to win a small battle that turns out big all over.
Please tell me your thoughts on this. ^_^
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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Great poem really! It was just amazing reading this! I just agree with everything it says in this poem so I hope to see more!![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
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