Complications

dark1angel · Jul 07, 2007, 03:18 PM

The world is full of wonders
and full of hopes and dreams
along with full of mistery beyond imaginations
it also represents our feelings in great personalities
that heads on to our greates moments of judgment

Which is described in a good matter of ways that poeple
correspond themselves as great achievers and also long arivals
of hatred agains one another with pitiful of violence through them
everybody is full of concerns, worryness, and as well complications
that are influenced by great terror of undignified kings that they think they rule the lands of earth i do not oblige the great things they have done

because everyone here on this globe has made a great involvement and made
a great impression by everyone that some poeple follow them in there footsteps that is what makes the complications is a great experience to handle when you are involve of great heroe-ism which is very acknowledgeful to us and to others that are very well accepted into these wonders of concepts.

Hope Everyone Admires this one. ^_^

!Akura13 · Jul 07, 2007, 03:22 PM

Oh wow! This is so good! I love it keep it up!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!!

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tora_tora_yatta · Jul 07, 2007, 03:22 PM

that was very good!! I loved it

I truly understand what you were feeling when you wrote that poem!!

xxoxx · Jul 07, 2007, 03:24 PM

It's a very great poem and i agree with you for every thing you say it in this poem ...I love it ...nice work ...keep it up..^^

Seirika · Jul 07, 2007, 03:54 PM

Wow,I was somewhat moved by it.Well that's life for you I guess^^;I enjoyed reading it by the way.

dark1angel · Jul 07, 2007, 03:55 PM

Thank you very much of you into taking part of this poem to me this poem did impact me into shaping the whole society with this powerful words that has come out from my head i guess i should do good things for the community other then making it look bad my only concern is just doing good for the poeple that need help in remodeling there precious place like home, community, etc.
the only oppurtunity i can do here is just make great suggestions and as well helping others on what is convinient for them that is what my real personality is on me when i do good honest jobs for the people that needs to chape up the whole society but i do not like this whole intervention of violence from the people that only likes to take part of revenge from each other that is really unforgivable which means i want everyone to clear up violence from them just so dumb to play with.
Well i hope everyone agrees with my saying that violence around the world is not the answer to win a small battle that turns out big all over.
Please tell me your thoughts on this. ^_^

!Akura13 · Jul 07, 2007, 03:58 PM

of coarse! Violence is never the answer!! Totally agree with ya!!

KuwiRules145 · Jul 07, 2007, 04:48 PM

Great poem really! It was just amazing reading this! I just agree with everything it says in this poem so I hope to see more!

*Peach_follows* · Jul 07, 2007, 07:32 PM

Ok... please forgive my criticism..
I understood the general concept of the poem. But I thought it was bit wordy. I'm not saying I don't understand complex wording, but when you put too many larger words in one paragraph it becomes overly complex and in my opinion takes away from the feeling of the poem.

dark1angel · Jul 11, 2007, 10:25 AM

Do not worry about it i wont be upset by your comments or critism i just needed to listen what kind of thoughts you might have in this poem and you may want to also give any suggestions you may have in this poem and my question as well so feel free to comment anything.

Jul 07, 2007, 03:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
dark1angel Tournaments Won: 1 Hybrid Humanoid Forever Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a Purified Realm Of Lightness Posts: 560 Thanks: 71 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts Credits: 20,887	Complications The world is full of wonders and full of hopes and dreams along with full of mistery beyond imaginations it also represents our feelings in great personalities that heads on to our greates moments of judgment Which is described in a good matter of ways that poeple correspond themselves as great achievers and also long arivals of hatred agains one another with pitiful of violence through them everybody is full of concerns, worryness, and as well complications that are influenced by great terror of undignified kings that they think they rule the lands of earth i do not oblige the great things they have done because everyone here on this globe has made a great involvement and made a great impression by everyone that some poeple follow them in there footsteps that is what makes the complications is a great experience to handle when you are involve of great heroe-ism which is very acknowledgeful to us and to others that are very well accepted into these wonders of concepts. Hope Everyone Admires this one. ^_^ __________________ Traveling so far can mean anything but in the real world your life can expand to your dreams. \|アスタロス\|
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Jul 07, 2007, 03:22 PM	#2 (permalink)
!Akura13 Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan... Posts: 638 Thanks: 9 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 12,099	Re: Complications Oh wow! This is so good! I love it keep it up!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!! ♥
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tora_tora_yatta Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In the arms of my loved one! Posts: 124 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 616	Re: Complications that was very good!! I loved it I truly understand what you were feeling when you wrote that poem!! __________________ Made by mi amigo Mveli2
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Jul 07, 2007, 03:24 PM	#4 (permalink)
xxoxx Otaku Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: 無くなった Posts: 354 Thanks: 3 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 3,573	Re: Complications It's a very great poem and i agree with you for every thing you say it in this poem ...I love it ...nice work ...keep it up..^^ __________________ Just Try It
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Seirika Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Somewhere over the RAINBOW Posts: 152 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,700	Re: Complications Wow,I was somewhat moved by it.Well that's life for you I guess^^;I enjoyed reading it by the way. __________________ Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.
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dark1angel Tournaments Won: 1 Hybrid Humanoid Forever Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a Purified Realm Of Lightness Posts: 560 Thanks: 71 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts Credits: 20,887	Re: Complications Thank you very much of you into taking part of this poem to me this poem did impact me into shaping the whole society with this powerful words that has come out from my head i guess i should do good things for the community other then making it look bad my only concern is just doing good for the poeple that need help in remodeling there precious place like home, community, etc. the only oppurtunity i can do here is just make great suggestions and as well helping others on what is convinient for them that is what my real personality is on me when i do good honest jobs for the people that needs to chape up the whole society but i do not like this whole intervention of violence from the people that only likes to take part of revenge from each other that is really unforgivable which means i want everyone to clear up violence from them just so dumb to play with. Well i hope everyone agrees with my saying that violence around the world is not the answer to win a small battle that turns out big all over. Please tell me your thoughts on this. ^_^ __________________ Traveling so far can mean anything but in the real world your life can expand to your dreams. \|アスタロス\|
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!Akura13 Banned Join Date: May 2007 Location: Wishing to go back to Japan... Posts: 638 Thanks: 9 Thanked 19 Times in 18 Posts Credits: 12,099	Re: Complications of coarse! Violence is never the answer!! Totally agree with ya!!
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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Complications Great poem really! It was just amazing reading this! I just agree with everything it says in this poem so I hope to see more! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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Peach_follows Femmebot's feel nothing. Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley Posts: 1,026 Thanks: 42 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 2,204	Re: Complications Ok... please forgive my criticism.. I understood the general concept of the poem. But I thought it was bit wordy. I'm not saying I don't understand complex wording, but when you put too many larger words in one paragraph it becomes overly complex and in my opinion takes away from the feeling of the poem. __________________ Who needs a spray can, when you're a femmebot? http://www.myspace.com/j1gg481tt
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Jul 11, 2007, 10:25 AM	#10 (permalink)
dark1angel Tournaments Won: 1 Hybrid Humanoid Forever Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a Purified Realm Of Lightness Posts: 560 Thanks: 71 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts Credits: 20,887	Re: Complications Do not worry about it i wont be upset by your comments or critism i just needed to listen what kind of thoughts you might have in this poem and you may want to also give any suggestions you may have in this poem and my question as well so feel free to comment anything. __________________ Traveling so far can mean anything but in the real world your life can expand to your dreams. \|アスタロス\|
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