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    confesed love

    you cheated on me and other girls...

    i got mad like all of us did ...

    you picked one over us all..

    but i want you to know i still have strong...

    quite strong feelings for you

    the hardest thing to do is sit and smile when your in the arms of another ..

    i cant even speek then i talk about you ..

    im beathless then i think of you..

    and the times we had..

    why cant i just face facts !!

    your not mine you were never mine..

    so why should i feel like this ....

    my hearts broken ...

    and my eyes full with tears...

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    Re: confesed love

    this is ones of loves worsts feelings know you love
    somone knowing that they cant be really yours , no
    matter how you try to reason it in your head it just seems
    to come back and hit your in the face and then it laughs at
    your attempts.

    im sorry for your *problems* but the best thing you can do
    is just let it slide off your back find other thing to feel yor thoughts
    writing for one like this poem is a good idea but its cool that your letting
    your thoughts out like this.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: confesed love

    thanks for that comment and for the advice too ^__^

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    Re: confesed love

    the best thing to do is move on...all your doing is hurting yourself.and if he cant see that you still have strong feelings for him then hes probly not worth the pain.lovely poem.keep it up!
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    Re: confesed love

    Awww...poor you!!! All the hurt in this poem. You should just move on just like what fallenangel25 said but your poem was amazing just to tell you that! Hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: confesed love

    well it seems like im not in the boat alone any more i know what its like so you should just forget them and move on then smile like never before knowing that one special person still awaits you

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    Re: confesed love

    T-T *sniff sniff* that was such a good poem!
    i went though almost the same thing T-T
    i know how you feel T___T
    i <3 this poem
    You wouldn't know a good thing
    if it came up and slit your throat

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    Re: confesed love

    if this love confesed you move on and try to another come ...that's was a very nice poem ....it's easy to understand how do you feel ...?
    i like it .....keep up...

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