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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | Confessions of the Heart I hope this turned out okay, because it's something that I've been experincing lately and I had to let it out! Confessions of the Heart We’ve been friends for what seems like forever and now the time has come I want to open up my heart and let words flow endless like a raging waterfall Except the easiest thing is often the hardest thing to let flow out of my mouth Curiosity sets in like people’s minds often wonder if a person is talking about them As I sit quietly thinking of what to say to you my thoughts begin swarming in my mind The constant buzzing of word sounds like a hive of angry bees protecting their queen Asking myself endless questions that forever seem to go unanswered in everyday life Trapped inside my own heart frantically searching for the person I thought I once knew Beginning to write every word down in hopes of finding that perfected chord to reach out My palms get sweaty my heart races as if I am singing in the greatest concert of my life Each word twist and turns forming sentences the begin to turn into the perfect message Now I’m hearing each melodic note as it flies through the air from my heart’s strings Saying I’ve admired from afar yet I’m always near as a friend to help you through anything Memories of you and I are constantly playing in my head like my favorite CD on repeat Trying to live out each moment to where it will never end I build myself up to tell you this You are my midnight sun, you are my moon lit day with this I want to say I love you
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![]() Credits: 10,349 | Re: Confessions of the Heart Quote:
The rest of the poem flowed very nicely and you got your message acrossed very well. Whoever she is, she's a lucky girl. Good job.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,336 | Very sweet poem bro. If guys read this to girls we'd melt right in their arms. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read your next one.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,176 | Re: Confessions of the Heart Thanks for the feedback sis! I honestly know that no one in this forum will use my words as something to tell girls, quite frankly no one really reads what I have to say except the ones that are open minded enough to read and understand what I'm truly trying to say. You, Shini, Kimi, Soldat of Life, Sazzy and a couple of others always give me something to strive for and that I truly appreciate!
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