Confessions of a Prodigal

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Confessions of a Prodigal


Blinded with blood-tinged tears,
Embraced by existent fears
Walking along the rocky path
Unsure where it will lead.

Once, I drowned myself to riches
Laid myself on the bed of ill wealth
Surrounded by massive luxuries
Pampered self to the sins of the world.

I went to casinos and lotteries’ galore
Spent treasures to satisfy this bodily longing,
I wore diamonds and emeralds and rubies
Faking myself to be the queen!

Then there came the frightful day,
I woke up in a bed of nails;
Aching pain stabbed my head
My once known riches, they left me!

Now, guilt started to accompany
Life’s every single day,
Blaming my id personality
For being such a wasteful person I’d been.

>>>its been quite a long time since i last submitted a poem. Thanks for reading and comments and critiques are welcomed.

Nice poem raja! I like the title of the this poem it really drew me in and you did and excellent job of keeping me entertained through out the poem! I don't see any spelling or grammar errors! Overall outstanding job raja! Looking forward to reading more of you poems in the future! Oh and I'm still waiting for the next chapter of the fanfic!:smile: :thumb:

It read like a sotry. Awesome job. The last verse of the poem seems a bit out of place, hpwever. It doenst sit well with the flow.

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Thanks Sensei-Kasai and Blue fox for reading and commenting on my poem. it is much appreciated. ^_^