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    confessions of a sad child

    this is my confessions
    im not happy
    im not nice
    im kinda slow
    and alotta naive
    these are the confessons
    of a sad child
    whose never had a happy home
    and never had good place to roam
    never had a true friend
    this is my confessions
    all of the above is me
    right down ta the "T"
    im not a nice person i may be selfesh and
    fake.
    but hey its me
    love it or hate it its still my confessions
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    Re: confessions of a sad child

    Makes me think of a rap song in progress. Not bad but could use some work.
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    thank ya sooooooooooooooooooo much............................
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    Re: confessions of a sad child

    I really liked this poem. is this how you really feel? lol probably not. maybe write a longer one??? But i shouldn't be saying that...lol

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    Re: confessions of a sad child

    wow that was deep reese cup I really liked it. love it or hate it part was cool.
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    Re: confessions of a sad child

    This is pretty good, I liked how you were able to join everything together, this kinda reminds me of song I forgot what it was called though. >.<


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