Thread: confused love~~**

lol now thats a good idea...im thinking of writing a book too...

Now i think im also in this kind of situation but it's a little different... 2 ppl like 1 girl but the girl don't know the other who loves her...and both of her lovers are friends and the other friend knows that his friend loves her so he chooses to step back and let him go to her...and that man is me...sad truth that is...

And this is a nice poem ^^ makes me sad though,...still there should be an ending 2 this story though...why don't u make the ending by making another poem...

yeah ill make the ending if it works out or now when i find out k ^__^ lol

This is a good poem.
I really like it.
But I hope everything works out for u.
And like Rave said take the one that loves you and tels you
Also take the one that there for you when you need him.
Well I can't wwait to read more.(^.^)

Very Confusing, in many ways. More of a talking poem, with tons of questions.

But I still like it Lizzie. ^^

thats what life is about its soo very confusing right, but eny way i like it equinn nice job.

hhmmm. all the poems you're making
seems to be all about a love triangle.
hehehehe.. are you ok? just asking..
you know me, i love those love triangle poems.

about your mistakes, its ok. It just shows
how complicated to make a poem.
its alright.. very nice one there.. =)